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Yeees...I'm still here ;) I'm soooo sorry it took soo long :/
@ Nalie: I’m glad you liked it till now and I hope, you’ll like Lily answer too :) xoxo
@LittleMissCullen: Don’t worry ;) if you hadn’t told me I wouldn’t have even noticed your mistake
well..maybe it’s the perfect answer, but it’s not gonna be this easy for James to change Lily’s mind :D
enjoy Lily’s letter! Xoxo
@BlackVanilla: Thanks! It’s really great to hear that you can understand the character’s feelings and kind of ‘feel with them’ :) and it’s also nice to know there’re not so many mistakes in it ;)
Anyways..you’re pretty good in English for 7th grade :) congrats!
I still don’t know how many chapters the story will have..when I’ll decide I’ll let you know ;) xoxo
@Mary Black: Thank you :D I love him too!! He’s soo cute <3 I hope you’ll like Lily’s (not so cute) answer ;) xoxo
@Mik: Merci beaucoup :D thanks for the compliments ;)
Maybe it’s because sometimes I feel just the way James has to feel..like he’s talking to a wall, and some other times I feel exactly like Lily..like deep inside I know the person I’m talking to is right, but I’m just to proud to admit it even to myself and so I simply go on and on with the same arguments juts wanting to be right :) I know it’s a little stupid..but this is how Lily is ;)
No, I’m not..actually I’m half German, half Italian ;) xoxo
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Dear James,
Is it that difficult to understand? Why? Do you want me to write in another language? Do you speek Chinese? 更好的?
Well, I’m just gonna explain it to you in English one last time, even though it shouldn’t be hard for to understand: James Potter, you are a really mean person. And it’s not only you; your stupid friends are the same! So just to be clear here’s what you’ve done: You treat all girls like dirt. Like they’re not good enough for you. Like they don’t even deserve to exist when you’re around ‘cause they could accidentally take away your air to breathe. And the ones that are good enough to be your potential girlfriends are not threatened better: once they get boring or too attached you get rid of them like you could get rid of old shoes. You just get new ones and don’t look at the old ones anymore.
That’s not how you should treat human beings! But you have no idea…you don’t see whining girls sitting in corners of the restrooms… But how could you? For you they don’t even exist anymore once you dumped them. But you don’t treat just girls like that. What about all the other kid’s that get mocked by you just because you don’t know what else to do?
You’re a Gryffindor? I’m really sorry but you don’t look like one to me. By the way you treat people your character reminds me more of a Slytherin than a courageous, fair Gryffindor!
You really want me like you?? I’m really sorry but I can’t do it if you only give me reasons not to.
I admit I don’t hate many persons, but with you I really don’t see why I should like you.
And stop this stupid ‘we belong together’ talk! It won’t help you. It’s just bullshit…and by the way I really don’t need your explanation of terms ‘soul mates’ or ‘dream girl’ because I know exactly what they mean and I’m also pretty sure that when you say them they don’t exactly apply to me!
And also stop telling me to think! I do that all the time, comparing to you. And the only thing I’m 100 percent sure of is that all what you say is totally stupid, senseless and that I do not think that we belong together, not even deep inside me! So just do me this favor and stop all this annoying ‘mind-reading-stuff’ cause it might work with all the other freaky girls out there but I can assure you, that it will not work with me! And believe me; I really don’t care if my letter made you sad! I wouldn’t even care if I got a letter soaked in tears from you! At least I tell you the facts! I don’t just write some random stuff and hope you like it! So if you really want to answer this letter, don’t bother if it’s not nice, I won’t either!
Lily
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