Fanfiction

Want to live while I'm alive - A Ghostly Ghost

von hela

Ich bin jettzt ü ers WE weg. Deshalb hier da nächste Kap. Wenn ich wieder komme will ich aber von meinen Abonenten und Sxhwrazlesern einen Kommi haben.
:)
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I first saw you in eddys pub.
And there you were the hub from the pub.
I was to shy to went and talk to you,
When I looked again at there was someone alse, who woo you.

Later in the night I was drunken and blue,
then I had the strange to talk to you,
But you were cooled and based to me,
So I notcied there is no we.

We will only live longer, if we are all the same
than we will brun as bright as a flame.
We are all a comunity
and everybody who is new is our enemy.

That was my sens from there on know,
And then my life was really slow.
I had enought time for everything,
But my life had lost its swing.

And Day for day, I was so blue,
That all because of you.

We will only live longer, if we are all the same,
than we will brun as bright as a flame.
We are all a comunity
and everybody who is new is our enemy.

In that time my Friemds were standing to me,
But you just were my enemy.
I was just hoping never meet you again,
because I would do suicide than.

In my whole life, I only trust my Friends,
My heart I only one time lend,
And that was at you you stupid littel thing,
In that time I was like a bird with only one of two wings.

We will only live longer, if we are all the same
than we will brun as bright as a flame.
We are a comunity
and everybody
who is new is our enemy.
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Der Refrain auf Deutsch:
Wir werden länger leben, wenn weil wir alle eins sind,
dann werden wir leuchten so hell wie Flammen sind.
Wir sind eine Gemeinschaft wie es scheint,
und jeder der neu ist, ist unser Feind.

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Das war der Refrain noch grob ins Deutsche übersetzt und so das er sich auch im Deutschen reimt.
Ja ich weiß ich hab kein tolles Schriftenglisch, aber fehler dürft ihr behalten.
Wie fandet ihr den Text?
Dachte das wäre mal nett.
LG Hela